{"id":1085,"date":"2015-02-23T14:32:21","date_gmt":"2015-02-23T19:32:21","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/?p=1085"},"modified":"2015-02-23T14:35:05","modified_gmt":"2015-02-23T19:35:05","slug":"writers-use-character-sheets-too-tracking-the-present-state","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/2015\/02\/writers-use-character-sheets-too-tracking-the-present-state\/","title":{"rendered":"Writers Use Character Sheets, Too: Tracking The Present State"},"content":{"rendered":"<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/02\/spiral_bound_notebooks.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-1091\" src=\"https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/02\/spiral_bound_notebooks.jpg\" alt=\"spiral_bound_notebooks\" width=\"518\" height=\"778\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/02\/spiral_bound_notebooks.jpg 518w, https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/02\/spiral_bound_notebooks-200x300.jpg 200w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 518px) 100vw, 518px\" \/><\/a><em><small>You may need a few&#8230; hundred of these&#8230;<\/small><\/em><\/p>\n<p>Anyone familiar with pen-and-paper roleplaying games (RPGs) has spent a few hours, and plowed through a few packs of cookies and soda, to set up character sheets. Character sheets <strong>define the starting state<\/strong> of a character, and allow a player to track <strong>how that state changes<\/strong> throughout the roleplaying campaign.<\/p>\n<p>Most character sheets are daunting to the first-time player, because there&#8217;s so much to track. What does the character look like? What are they good at? What equipment are they carrying? What spells have they memorized (if any)? If you&#8217;re roleplaying with a thoughtful group, you may also have to come up with a background for the character, and decide what their primary traits and motivations are.<\/p>\n<p>Over the course of the campaign, <em>most<\/em> of these things change. Hopefully, you filled in your character sheet with a pencil; you&#8217;ll be doing an awful lot of erasing and rewriting as your character uses up potions, gets whacked in the head by goblins, and learns new skills. With a good roleplaying group, they&#8217;ll grow as characters, too: having their weaknesses and prejudices challenged, banding together with others to overcome obstacles&#8230; and earning those delicious experience points.<\/p>\n<p>Your character sheet tells you the character&#8217;s state at the present point in time. Now doesn&#8217;t that sound useful to someone who has to care very much about character consistency and continuity: namely, writers?<\/p>\n<p>A lot of planning has to go into stories, especially long ones featuring multiple characters. Some writers find it useful to maintain support notes, outlines, and various other &#8220;bible&#8221; documents outside of the work itself, as reference material for when they themselves forget what this character they haven&#8217;t seen in 100 pages was up to.<\/p>\n<p>For novel-length work, I&#8217;ve found it really helpful to track both a character&#8217;s current state, <em>and<\/em> how it changes over time (i.e., their arc). I&#8217;ll talk more about change-tracking later. For now, we&#8217;ll focus on how and what to track about a character&#8217;s state in a particular scene, chapter, etc.<\/p>\n<p>First off: there is no right answer. Second: I&#8217;m still working out my own system. But so far, using the idea of an RPG character sheet, these are some things I&#8217;ve found useful to track about a character&#8217;s <span style=\"text-decoration: underline;\"><strong>present state<\/strong><\/span>:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Mood- how they feel right now, and why.<\/li>\n<li>Attitude toward other characters in the chapter\/scene, and why.<\/li>\n<li>Thing(s) they want.<\/li>\n<li>Action(s) they intend to carry out.<\/li>\n<li>Item(s) they&#8217;re carrying, if any.<\/li>\n<li>Injuries\/illnesses\/weaknesses they currently have, if any.<\/li>\n<li>A general idea of their skills and personality.<\/li>\n<li>Notes on their present environment- how they feel about it, what&#8217;s around for them to play with, etc.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>These are all things that can, and should, shine through in various ways while drafting the scene. They&#8217;re great for continuity, i.e. not losing track of that whatsit I put in someone&#8217;s hands a scene earlier. And, if I&#8217;m short on ideas, looking at these notes often gives me an idea of how to proceed with writing that character.<\/p>\n<p>Now, unlike a character sheet, I don&#8217;t have one centralized place where I track all this stuff. Since Scrivener lets you attach notes to individual scenes, I tend to note down this stuff in those spaces. Or, I may use comments to do the same thing. (<em>Hey, this character said this because she&#8217;s trying to get this other guy in trouble.<\/em>)<\/p>\n<p>For inventory and injury, I have tried doing that in a separate document, listing that stuff for every chapter. I&#8217;m not sure I like this approach because it&#8217;s extra work, and takes me out of my work in progress, to go track down the document and scroll to the chapter I&#8217;m interested in. Plus, I make copy\/paste errors all the time. In the future, I&#8217;ll probably attach these notes to each scene as well.<\/p>\n<p><strong>What present moment information do you track about your characters, if any? Where do you track it? Drop me a note in the comments and let me know!<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><!-- Place this tag in your head or just before your close body tag. --><br \/>\n<script type=\"text\/javascript\" src=\"https:\/\/apis.google.com\/js\/plusone.js\"><\/script><\/p>\n<p><!-- Place this tag where you want the widget to render. --><\/p>\n<div class=\"g-post\" data-href=\"https:\/\/plus.google.com\/106756336697302613382\/posts\/Ke6jmmpwcfB\"><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>You may need a few&#8230; hundred of these&#8230; Anyone familiar with pen-and-paper roleplaying games (RPGs) has spent a few hours, and plowed through a few packs of cookies and soda, to set up character sheets. Character sheets define the starting state of a character, and allow a player to track how that state changes throughout the roleplaying campaign. Most character sheets are daunting to the first-time player, because there&#8217;s so much to track. What does the character look like? 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