{"id":350,"date":"2014-04-07T16:25:19","date_gmt":"2014-04-07T21:25:19","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/?p=350"},"modified":"2014-04-07T16:27:15","modified_gmt":"2014-04-07T21:27:15","slug":"be-a-beta-star-part-i-giving-great-feedback","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/2014\/04\/be-a-beta-star-part-i-giving-great-feedback\/","title":{"rendered":"Be A Beta-Star, Part I: Giving Great Feedback"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/stars.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-354\" alt=\"stars\" src=\"https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/stars.jpg\" width=\"1536\" height=\"1024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/stars.jpg 1536w, https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/stars-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/stars-1024x682.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1536px) 100vw, 1536px\" \/><\/a><small><em>(Image credit: <a href=\"http:\/\/texturezoom.com\" target=\"_blank\">texturezoom.com<\/a>)<\/em><\/small><\/p>\n<p>Beta-reading not only provides an opportunity to help others, but also exercises your creative muscle, which aids you in your own writing.\u00a0 It&#8217;s a true honor and privilege whenever you&#8217;re asked to be a beta-reader.\u00a0 It&#8217;s even better to be a <em>trusted<\/em> beta-reader, someone whose opinion others repeatedly rely on when developing their ideas.\u00a0 Here are some tips for giving the best feedback possible:<\/p>\n<p><strong>Be Honest.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><em>This<\/em>, first and foremost.\u00a0 Don&#8217;t have the time to devote to a proper critique?\u00a0 The story isn&#8217;t your cup of tea, or the genre isn&#8217;t one you&#8217;re familiar with?\u00a0 Best to be upfront about it, rather than half-assing things and wasting everyone&#8217;s time.\u00a0 Being honest also means telling the writer about your <em>every<\/em> impression, not just what you liked.\u00a0 Critique that avoids problems doesn&#8217;t help your writer improve.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Be Nice.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Yes, your main goal should be honesty, but your delivery matters too.\u00a0 There&#8217;s no need to be an asshole about it- you&#8217;re trying to help this person, not tear them down.\u00a0 Always phrase things so your critique is clearly about the <em>work<\/em>, not the <em>writer<\/em>.\u00a0 The writer will be more open to phrasing like &#8220;I think X could be improved if you [suggestion]&#8221; rather than &#8220;You suck at X.\u00a0 Change it.&#8221;\u00a0 Remember what it&#8217;s like when you&#8217;re the writer looking for critique, how <a href=\"https:\/\/ellismorning.com\/blog\/2014\/02\/the-terror-of-being-read\/\" target=\"_blank\">nerve-wracking<\/a> it can be.\u00a0 A writer must often overcome immense anxiety to even <em>ask<\/em> for your help.\u00a0 Don&#8217;t make them sorry they did.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Be On-Target.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>If the writer doesn&#8217;t provide specific things they want feedback on, ask for some.\u00a0 Are they worried about pacing, spelling\/grammar, cohesion?\u00a0 Should you treat this as a first draft (and be more forgiving as a whole), or a polished final draft?\u00a0 This will help both of you make the most of your time.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Be Thorough.<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Have you ever attended a writer&#8217;s group where everyone is expected to solicit and receive feedback?\u00a0 For the most part they&#8217;re wonderfully helpful, but inevitably, there are one or two readers who hand back every sample with no notes, saying only, &#8220;It&#8217;s good!&#8221;\u00a0 My paranoid brain always assumes they either (a) didn&#8217;t care for the genre\/story (absolutely their prerogative, but at least tell me as much); or (b) thought it was an unmitigated trainwreck, and are trying to avoid saying so.<\/p>\n<p>Don&#8217;t be one of these people.\u00a0 Have an opinion!\u00a0 To develop one:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Several reads are best.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>As much as possible, complete your first read without <em>any<\/em> thought toward critique or the writer&#8217;s concerns.\u00a0 Record your reactions and first impressions on a separate sheet of paper.\u00a0 It may be that some of the questions you have at the beginning are answered later in the piece, so that&#8217;s why you don&#8217;t want to make notes in the work itself just yet.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Note down things you enjoyed- good lines, funny parts, etc.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Note down moments when you were confused, bored, or found humor in something that wasn&#8217;t supposed to be funny.\u00a0 These are points where you disconnected from the story.\u00a0 It&#8217;s important for the writer to know about them.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>Note down your impressions of the characters- what you like or don&#8217;t like about them, and why.\u00a0 It may be you&#8217;re not <em>supposed<\/em> to like them.\u00a0 This allows the writer to gauge whether his setup is working as intended.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>If given specific things to watch out for, comment on these to the best of your ability.\u00a0 Go back and reread specifically for those things if you have to.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>If spelling and grammar are really bad, don&#8217;t try to correct every last thing- just note that these need improvement.\u00a0 If spelling\/grammar are decent, do note the mistakes you find (if any).<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<ul>\n<li>For anything you didn&#8217;t like, prepare as many suggestions for improvement as possible.\u00a0 It&#8217;s much more helpful to hear &#8220;X didn&#8217;t work for me, how about you try this instead?&#8221; versus &#8220;X needs work.\u00a0 I&#8217;m not sure what.&#8221;<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Once finished, go through your critique with the writer.\u00a0 I like face-to-face for this best, fueled by coffee or similarly wonderful substances, but email isn&#8217;t bad either.\u00a0 The reason face-to-face is nice is that you can immediately delve into or clarify your remarks as needed.\u00a0 You can also brainstorm together, which I find is the best part of beta-reading.\u00a0 Many things that end up in my manuscripts were spawned during these caffeine- and laugh-addled sessions, things I <em>never<\/em> would&#8217;ve thought of on my own.<\/p>\n<p>Moreover, it feels <em>really<\/em> good to help other writers improve their work!<\/p>\n<p><strong>Do you have any suggestions for providing the best feedback possible?\u00a0 Drop me a line in the comments!<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><!-- Place this tag in your head or just before your close body tag. --><br \/>\n<script type=\"text\/javascript\" src=\"https:\/\/apis.google.com\/js\/plusone.js\"><\/script><\/p>\n<p><!-- Place this tag where you want the widget to render. --><\/p>\n<div class=\"g-post\" data-href=\"https:\/\/plus.google.com\/106756336697302613382\/posts\/JNLQhHzm1Tz\"><\/div>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>(Image credit: texturezoom.com) Beta-reading not only provides an opportunity to help others, but also exercises your creative muscle, which aids you in your own writing.\u00a0 It&#8217;s a true honor and privilege whenever you&#8217;re asked to be a beta-reader.\u00a0 It&#8217;s even better to be a trusted beta-reader, someone whose opinion others repeatedly rely on when developing their ideas.\u00a0 Here are some tips for giving the best feedback possible: Be Honest. 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